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Hate-Filled Eyes

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I once passed a family

of Eyes on my nightly walk

through the park. They stared

at me, perfectly still, save for

the movement of their feathery husks.

They were perched on a low hanging

branch of an oak, staring, staring,

staring. I stopped, looked up at the

diamonds above, trying to keep a level

head. But the stares, the constant stares

brought my anger to a boil. As a great

fury filled my veins, I turned to stare

right back. But what I turned to                

was Hell. Eyes full of scorn, Eyes full

of wrath, Eyes full of prejudice stared

at me. The fear, my fear, escalated so

rapidly, alongside my heart, that I

ran, took flight! But the Eyes

took flight as well, intent on

me joining them in Hell. And so

I ran, ran through the underbrush,

ran through the shrubs and thicket,

all to escape the hate. I looked

up, up toward the diamonds, seeking

desperately for a reprieve. No diamonds,

just Eyes, Eyes all around, watching for

any mistake. There is no escaping

Eyes filled with such hate.

Here is yet another poem that I made in my creative writing class. For that lesson, we had an exercise that helped us come up with the idea for our poem. We had to read through another person's poem, and find six words that we liked. We then had to write a poem around those words. I ended up with Birds, Eyes, Tree, Cliff, Stars, and Heart.
 . . . As you can probably tell, Cliff got lost somewhere in the writing process Sweat Drop revamp 

Luckily for me my instructor didn't require us to actually use all six words, so I was in the clear Whew
And yet again, I have no clue as to why I chose prejudice as the focus of this poem, except this time it is not from lack of memory. The topic just sort of sprang up randomly while I was writing, it was like my brain had a mind of its own! Avatar Sokka (a big hug to those who got the reference :smile: ) 
Thank you for reading, and if you feel so inclined leave a comment below Smirk Smiley 
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